Discuss the process of revising my essay

Discuss the process of revising my essay. Listed below is some of the key points to talk about
– Took out a lot of intext citations and changed the paper more into my voice and who I am as a writer instead of a paper listed with facts.
– Changed the intro into something that will catch the readers eye.
– how we cut down on the wordiness
– How we changed the essay from a causal essay into a definition essay
– Talk about something we kept the same in the two papers and why.

I will attach the two papers that were done and the form stating everything my professor wants
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12487366 | ENG 1510 SE5.pdf
12487374 | Terrorism_Final_Paper.pdf
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