How do these two sources relate to each other? How could the student have made the relationship clearer?

Examining an essay (APA Style 7th Edition)

This request is not an essay, but it is requesting to write about your discussion and evaluation on an essay (attached file). Please, do not format the paper like an essay.

Please follow the following questions, discuss and evaluate to the essay (attached file) based on those questions.

Note that this isn’t a perfect paper. More synthesis is necessary between the sources. However, as you can see from the annotated bibliography, the student has narrowed her topic. She has moved from the general effects of China’s One Child Policy to the specific effect on the care for the elderly in China.

1. In the paper, notice how the writer integrates the first two sources into the second paragraph. How do these two sources relate to each other? How could the student have made the relationship clearer? (Answer in 3 – 4 sentences.) For example, you might consider if the sources are similar or different, if they support each other or contradict each other, or some other observation.
2. The writer cited Zhang & Goza (2016) in various parts of the paper. What did these authors add to the literature on the elder care in China, according to this paper? You might focus on paragraphs 2, 3 and 5 (answer in 3-4 sentences.) For example, you might begin, “The research by Zhang & Goza focused specifically on …”