How clear is this student’s thesis statement? How is the thesis statement supported by the other annotated areas of the paragraph?

1. Review the annotated page from the student sample literature review—this can be found in the Week 5 Materials folder. How clear is this student’s thesis statement? How is the thesis statement supported by the other annotated areas of the paragraph?

2. The Literature Review calls for a thesis statement that stems from the answer to your research question. Now that you’ve refined your research question and completed your Annotated Bibliography, draft an answer to your research question—this answer will become your thesis statement. (Research Question: How does administrative support contribute to the success of the mission of the CBP?)

3. Discuss how this thesis statement may be revised, as you collect more sources, to be more specific in its purpose/intended audience/stance/etc?