What did you discovered about your original essay by doing PDA-What concrete advice will you give to yourself?

Post Draft Analysis

o use proper paragraph formatting in which you separate each idea(topic) into distinct paragraph as you answer prompts about analyzing the clarity of your argument.
Part Three(Revision Plan: Thinking-and writing-about my thinking)
In a well-composed paragraph format with separate paragraphs for each topic. Part three is where you write a narrative of about 200 words explaining your plan to revise the essay. You are now your own writing coach as you articulate a coherent revision plan. What did you discovered about your original essay by doing PDA?
What concrete advice will you give to yourself? Be sure you use the meta- language of the writing process. Explain