Write a 12-15 sentence reflection paragraph explaining what you focused on improving in your revision

Revision essay

1. Revise topic and topic sentences (present in outline form at the beginning of the revision)

2. One body paragraph

3. Write a 12-15 sentence reflection paragraph explaining what you focused on improving in your revision; discuss how you worked to improve the quality of your organization, content, and language.Be as specific as possible in this piece.