Revision asks you to look at an essay from the reader’s perspective: do they have enough information to be convinced?

Revision Exercise 1: Hotspotting* True essay revision is more than cleaning up errors in spelling and punctuation (that’s editing, the final stage of the writing process). Revision asks you to look at an essay from the reader’s perspective: do they have enough information to be convinced? Are you giving them information in the right order? […]